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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

keep it going

SirCarlSirCarlover 8 years ago
Well done!

Well written and presented.

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999over 8 years ago
I need to see where this goes

Keep them coming

ColleenDColleenDalmost 8 years ago
Editing suggestion

I think there is too much backstory at the beginning - cull it!

ColleenDColleenDalmost 8 years ago
Editing suggestion

I think there is too much backstory at the beginning - cull it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A+

I look forward to the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
longest second page ever

i love it so far!

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