All Comments on 'The Appointment'

I started reading what looked like an unusual fantasy, but ended up skimming because of the second-person narration distractions. Addressing the reader as 'you' as though the reader is the active person in the story is fine for cooking books and maintenance manuals, but rarely for short stories.

Apart from that, this looked like a well-written story. As a story from new contributing author, that was a definite plus. I look forward with interest to any further contributions.

Lue

Ps: Justalittlehobby, your biog page is uninformative. I find it helpful to know a little more about authors of stories I find interesting, and what influences their stories. Perhaps fill in a few details if you intend to write more stories?

The title says it all

Great story. Shame it's the only one you've written. I want more!