All Comments on 'The Apprentice Ch. 03'

To all the readers of these tale, I issue an apology.

I hope you are able to read all the parts in full now. From this day on, I'll leave the breaking up portion to Literotica. Thank you for your patience.

I have two more tales in pending. Hope they are approved. Thank you for all the nice comments and adding me as a fave author! ;)

Michael Mandrake

did you notice that ch 3 and 5 are the same

So I see that 3 and 5 are identical.

Not sure what to do about that.

Thank you to the last commenter for pointing that out. I knew it looked weird that there was a chapter 6.

Sorry for the confusion. Read 1-5

i want to hear wedding bells

fuck my cock is throbbing in my pants.?

IF you're going to write these short chapters you need to put more substance into it. While its a good story this is chap 3 with only 2 to go and they've barely spoken

one word wooden this is so stiff its shite