All Comments on 'The Apprentices Ch. 01'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Really a great story

Loved it, I don't often give five stars.

Funny in some ways, here the kids were to be taught and they took control.

I'm sure there will be another chapter so we will know what they are being trained for.

typewriter11typewriter11almost 12 years ago
Loved it!

Nice character development and very much looking forward to the next chapter. Been a while since I gave 5 stars but definitely think this story merits it. Well done :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it!

Can't wait for part two!

ohthejoyohthejoyalmost 11 years ago
omg

i want Nathan to fuck me

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Thanks

For writing

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