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All Comments on 'The Approach'

by Von6969

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Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 8 years ago
too disjointed

A series of unconnected or barely connected sentences.

I've seen better plot development in cheap porn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Mature?

Theres fuck all mature about the story or the writing useless crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So thats why his wife left him

Playing computer games all day. Wanders down a street and thinks he can fuck the first woman he sees. Got it.

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