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by creationlaw

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

bs

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You have some potential!

You have some potential but need advice on punctuation. Run-on sentences, etc. distract me.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
I liked it

Not just a sex story but one of life and one I can relate to.

chytownchytownover 9 years ago
Thanks***

For sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
it is what it is

Good story

shadowdustershadowdusterover 9 years ago
Good read

finely got back with a heating wife

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 5 years ago

seems there should be a 2nd part to this

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Fair story

Okay story. Good writing.

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