All Comments on 'The Arrangement Ch. 01'

is there to be constructive ? nothing at all

Well thought out, well presented. Looking forward to the next chapter(s) coming quickly.

I really enjoyed your writing and am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.

I'm glad to see a new story by this author. As usual, the storyline is intriguing and the sex is definitely hot! This could have easily been a "short" story, so I am anxious to see how it develops.

We've been in a 'new story drought' and you just showed with more than plain old water. Looking forward to this story progressing.

I can not wait until you release the next chapter.. Its a great written story... Very hot.

but is another chapter coming out? Been a bit and am just wondering.

I hope they all don't become the neighborhood swingers. Leave the backstabbing whore.

Nicely done. Your story is something that each of us can relate to. The discovery of betrayal, the conflicting emotions, the uncertainty of what to do, so many things happening in the same short period of time. Good Author, good story line. Thanks.

I strongly dislike stories where the husband catches his wife cheating and slinks away without a confrontation. There seems to be many readers who like this kind of bullshit. 1 star

Cucky boy getting double-edged..

What kind of garbage is this.

If it weren't for one spouse catching their spouse having sex, there would be far less divorces in this world. It happens all the time.

so far, so good! liking it.