All Comments on 'The Arrangement Ch. 05'

yay soo happy that you returned and that the story is continuing please keep going and can't wait for the ending thanks

I think I understand why Gavin was hired. Peter hopes once Gavin and Julieanne meet again she will have some closure on that part of her past. I hope Peter's plan doesn't backfire on him. After Gavin finds Julieanne he need to let her know he was keeping tabs on her. Keeping secrets is what landed them where they are right now. Both of them need therapy and better communication skills.

I've no sympathy or love for the Peter character. He's an overbearing, power abusing ass. Gavin is right to be concerned. Just another predatory overly aggressive dominant that needs a double tap. Julieanne definitely needs an abortion so she's not dealing with his child for life.

Double tap=2 bullets to the head using a small caliber pistol w/silencer...alias-karma

Loved this to no end.... I cannot wait for the next chapter this is such a good story

Lovely writing, glad you are back. Julianne and Peter have so much in common and yet they are so far apart. This couple have feeling for each other that is strong as for Gavin he is her past not her future. Waiting for the next update. Thank you

Please remind me; who is Kyle?

Kyle is Dr. Kyle Richardson. He should sound familiar as he is the doctor friend of Julieanne's father, and the doctor that helped Julieanne get back to health. Dr. Kyle makes his first appearance at the beginning of this chapter. His role will be small but influential. Julieanne's real dilemma is whether to keep the child - and not to abort. This won't be an easy decision for her by any means. Thanks all for tuning in and voting.

I'm so excited! Yay, an update W00T W00T!!! This chapter was everything!

I have to re-read this story again and this chapter have me thinking. These two characters have some problem with their feeling of trust and I truly believe they should be given a change to have a relationship but as friends, perhaps they can be together later on and if Juilanne decided to keep her baby they could at least work together as parents. I like Juilanne and Peter and I believe they should have chance to rediscover each other. Thank you Flowerbloom.

In order to amass the wealth and power Peter has one must be aggressive. It is in his nature to not stop until he gets what he wants. I just hope he is honest with her about what he is doing.

I personally like an aggressive man. Controlling? Not so much.

I LOVE the way he takes care of her sexually. Nothing like being kissed on the neck or having my nipples sucked while being fingered. Damn

Both Peter and Julie have baggage that can/will destroy what they could have together. I am anxiously waiting the next installment. Keep up the good work!!!

THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I STARTED READING AND COULD NOT STOP!! DEFINITIVELY WAITING FOR MORE, UDM SOON!!!;)

Please update. This story is too good to just let it drop off.

You have to finish this story it should be illegal to leave a story this good unfinished lol please update!!!

So seriously you cannot put up a story that's this involved & not FINISH IT. I mean really come on. On the bright side YOU know you're a hit. Interestin stuff keep it comin

Please continue this story! I love it and want to find out how it ends. Writing is very well done, I'm hooked

I'm begging!!! Please update this story! It is not fair to readers. Please just at least finish this story. It should be against the website rules for you to start a story and wait a millennium to update it. Please update please, don't you see every one loves this story!

I'm not a fan of how their relationship started but it is clear Peter has feelings for her. A little competition would be good for Peter. It will show him the real meaning of "work for her". Yes, she's pregnant and she has major decisions to make. Peter may already know where she is, but hired the detective to test the waters of if she really loved him. For a man of his means, finding info on her would be too easy.

I really like that cliffhanger. Nicely done.

Been away from this story for awhile, so refreshing to see it was updated to chapter 5. Looking forward to chapter 6.

I just cnt understand how you can keep us waiting for nearly 2 years for an update, I understand writers block and all that bt 2 f*****g years!??!! WTF!! Unless God forbid you died… then I'll get it. Otherwise YOU'RE JUST MEAN

*plays Where Ya At by Future* nah, but seriously girl, are you okay? Where are you? :/

I'm gonna need you to update this story now!

It's been 3 years. Where's Part 6?

Please continue with this story....

This story is amazing its hard to find stories this good on this site or anywhere else, please continue!!!

Please Continue with this story....can't wait for Ch.06

hello writer. hope all is well. loved the story but it's not finished this has really put a damper on things. oh well many writers leave you hanging on this site. boo who I'll peek in from time to time to see if you've decided to post chapters 6-10. lol take care. thanks for sharing this tidbit.

Hey...I do have to apologize for doing exactly what I truly hate - leaving a story hanging! I have been working on part 6 for years and never quite got the feel for it. Not an excuse, just a fact. I have done so many things since I started this wonderful adventure, new job, new life, several (not long lasting) relationships, etc. Right now I'm studying my ass off for a lifetime accomplishment/goal. I've devoted the entirety of 2018 to it. but I haven't forgotten about this series, these characters and finishing this story. I will finish this story. That's my goal and promise. It will get done. I appreciate the readership and the support - you all have been amazing.

QMS

Literotica should only allow completed works to be posted. Smh, you want us to wait a year for a chapter lol

I enjoyed this story but really disappointed it hasn't been finished. I agree with the September comment, Literotica shouldn't publish works that aren't finished or finished within a certain period of time.

Please I beg of you, bestow another chapter of this incredible journey to your readers. That is all I ask. Thanks

What a story and so hot. Hope all is well and please if you can work on a follow-up chapter you are very talented

Where is the end

No way you have to finish😭