All Comments on 'The Art Of Desire Ch. 03'
by dizzylia
- 7 Comments
Arago007over 10 years agoI had actually just read the first two chapters and didn't expect a 3rd as it had been so long... Thank you for returning and giving us a new chapter, not going to hold my breath but I REALLY look forward to the next :)
Anonymousover 10 years agoI look forward to seeing how to balance Meaghan's desires with the needs of her two lovers. Your writing is excellent and sensitive. Being a straight man I have wondered how worlds like this can be joined.
dizzyliaover 10 years agoAuthorThere is actually a fourth chapter already in the queue. This went a little more into the realm of angst than I usually write, so it seemed like smaller portions were a good idea. Thank you so much for the feedback!
Bert_Feggover 10 years agoRead this chapter first for some reason - Liked it a lot. Now to start again, at the beginning :)
naughtyinsilkover 10 years agoreal characters with real emotions in what in real life and is described here a complicated situation. The quality of the writing is first class, well worth the wait from part 2, as part 4 beckons me to read next, I cannot wait to dive in <3
adidasgalover 10 years agoGosh for a minute........ i thought...... i could feel Samantha's fear and i was so proud of Meaghan. This is better than good, it is AWESOME!
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