by Greg_Body
Yes, sorry.. your stories are so stupid and corny. The artist who painted a girl who haunted him, blah blah.. oh.. c'mon. Sounds like some silly tv thing for those who never knew artists or ever been to a gallery. and the pizza story.. with the poem at the end.. urgh.
you are too romantic to write erotic hot stories. well, at least that's what i think. otherwise you should mention at the begining of each story that it's only for people ages 16-18 max. not sure they would dig this even.
sorry for my bad english, as it is not my first language.