All Comments on 'The Aspirer's Audition'

Very good albeit the sudden ending. I so love the "casting couch" stories. She still hungers for fame and her agent his commission.

Don't leave us with just the one beer.

...or plagiarism?

It's one thing to craft a similar story, another to lift phrases wholesale.

I have no objections, I thought it was great.

The first 3/4 was GREAT. Then, it was almost like you got tired at the ending (sex). If you had drawn out the sex at the end -- in specifics, this could have been a FIVE star! A great start, but disappointing finish.

Please, the writer tried hard but it's not a good non consent story.

And 'Casting Kate by shaunreagh" is not the best example of a non consent story either.

nice!

As a college student I was always looking for opportunities to make money. Something that caught my eye was an ad for a model to work a session at a photography school. It was an easy gig, all I had to do was sit there and model for the instructor while he photographed me and showed various camera techniques and equipment in front of the class. Two weeks later I received a call from him for a model on a bird theme shoot at his private studio. Curious I agreed to pose for him. At the studio I found he had a set with a forest background and a tree prop. When I inquired about my attire he produced a full white mask with a large beak. Then I realize this was the extent of what I was to wear. For the next two hours I was as naked as a plucked chicken imitating a bird. Then he wanted me to pose without the hot smothering mask. For the next hour I wore nothing as he shot away. I was paid nothing but sent a CD of my bird mask session. Meanwhile he had a pay site I learned where I was displayed with several other girls I recognized from the photography school that were as naked as I was.