All Comments on 'The Assassin's Target'

please keep writing you show such promise as an author. i enjoyed your piece so much! cant wait for chapter 2 please write it soon!

You had me up to the word vampire. While the story may be non erotic it is also strongly sci fi and fantasy so you should make it plain at the begfinning as others may not be interested in vampires etc

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. My apologies, you are right. If there is a next installment I will be sure to write that it is sci-fi/fantasy. However, I must point out that the tags do include the words "vampire" and "supernatural".

Best wishes, sweetintensity~

And just what Nissa is. I think you would get a lot more readers in non human or sci fi, but I like your writing style :)