All Comments on 'The Assignation'

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SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffabout 7 years ago
This was really good !!

This is really good writing.

You set the plot.

You describe the characters, but not overly so. That's job of the reader to fill & expand the characters in their own mind.

Now I have to read all your other stories.

Thank you; great job.

darkmaasdarkmaasover 6 years ago
Wow

This is the nicest of erotic writing. Spare, languid and frankly delicious ... intimacy stripped naked and freed from the need to be anything other than carnal pleasure.

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