by ktmccoll
This is really good writing.
You set the plot.
You describe the characters, but not overly so. That's job of the reader to fill & expand the characters in their own mind.
Now I have to read all your other stories.
Thank you; great job.
This is the nicest of erotic writing. Spare, languid and frankly delicious ... intimacy stripped naked and freed from the need to be anything other than carnal pleasure.