All Comments on 'The Assignment Ch. 5'

Right up until the end I was really enjoying the story. I have always appreciated the way that curious2c offers both the mens' and womens' perspectives. OUCH! I was not expectiong the husband to relent to and even becomming the pimp to, his wifes' sexual escapades. Being the hopeless romantic, I always hope that everything turns out the way I want it to. Maybe if it always did I would get bored, or maybe the hopeless romantic in me would be satisfied.

Had the story ended differently, easliy a score of 100, due to my disappointment, 50. Sorry

The only logical ending was for him to divorce the slut and get on with his life.

I hate you you scumbag authour. You just had to ruin what would have been a great story. If I could get you I would tie you up and fuck your wife.

But then again, you would probably enjoy watching that.

In closing, you suck!!

I like this story because woman wasn't drugged or something. She acted like some slut that wanted it bad. If anyone know similar story (about sluts that lick assholes, get it up the ass and liking it in process) please write to digigemm@yahoo.com naming author and storyname. I'll appreciate that.

This story should have ended with Assignment ch 2

Nightowl21

You are one sick puppy - it seems you have no reality - but then when you write for only yourself why not !!!

You have a talent for writting - but no real life sense of consequence - crude you can do - but can you do better -

Improve your reality then perhaps your customers (your readership) might better accept your offerings.

TWO MALE APE SEE A PRETTY FEMALE APE THE PRETTY OF ALL THE FEMALE APES IN THERE JUNGLE.ONE OF THE MALE APES SAID WHY NOT MARRY HER,THE OTHER APE SAID NO BRAINS.APES CAN SEE A DUMBY,WHY NOT HUMAN.WHO WANTS TO BE MARRY TO A DUMB WIFE.

I'm rating sex in this story, it's very hot. I don't mind plot being not very realistic. Good job! Anyone who want to read about good bex ny hot slut - this story is for you!

Any low life skank or wussie husband could write this trashy theme - why would anyone with talent do it??? Do you understand the affect of your words on others?? I don't think you have bothered to date!

Your pathetic - sick - and like chaos - well some sickies do appreciate it by their remarks.

Get some help before it's too late for any self respect.

You have to give Kate credit for all she did in the story. She was married to a strong man whom people thought was a wimp. She had Gary as an illicit lover who took her through sexual changes. She lost her husband when he left, She hungered for him, located him, got him back, he let her get loose for a while, because he knew that her doing a cold turkey from all that sex wasn't right. Jim was also able to get some extra sex to let off a little steam and the live happily ever after. Maybe six months down the line after so much unprotected sex, one of them may contract HIV/AIDS or gonorrhea, but that should stop them, because it could tape up to six monthe before they found out they have been affected.

there had to be some other way to end this story... to me what he did is a wimp out ... and i think there is others to make pay other than gary.... i would have fucked up a few more myself.... and her all she is worth is how much money can i make off her... i would find me nice pussy t ofuck and id rent hers out... she said all she wants is to be treated like gary did that should be easy... just dont ever fuck her yourself... just tell her you like her as a slut better this way ... tepe her sell her make tons of money ...hide money retire and leave her sorry ass somewhere ... hell sell her to a black pimp

Dude, seriously, change your plot a bit. I read your other story and you ALWAYS have the same plot. I guess you want that because you like your story to have a "romantic happy ending" even if it sound completely and utterly stupid.

Here's how curious2c story works:

1. Husband found out wife cheating.

2. Husband gets really mad.

3. Husband divorce.

4. Husband discover the person whom wife cheat is "tricking" her to cheating with him.

5. Husband start to date wife again, have great sex with his wife or ex wife, then they get back together again.

Sigh. You're such a waste of talent.

He loved her so much he became her wimp cuckold. She loved him so little she let him. A very sad depressing story.

A great story has to be somewhat believable. This one was neither, unfortunately.

I disagree with those who say it was a bad ending and that you portrayed the husband as a wimp. It seems to me the husband's character was falling back on the old "If you can't beat em' join em'line. He still wanted her and finally accepted the fact that she was never going to be able to go back to being faithful no matter how much she loved him. He got his revenge on the guy in my opinion not enough. But in a sence he got revenge on his wife even if he loved her if somebody was going to use her as a gangbang slut it might as well be him. He became her slut master.

I loved the series, but obviously neither wanted kids. I have to say that i myself could never have went back to kate as he did, or at least in the way he did. I could see me taking her back as a lover, but there would have to be a divorce. I could live with her and I could fuck her, but also obviously before I did she would need to be tested before intercourse as with the amount of partners she had. If she didn't have some kind of sexually transmitted disease it would be a miracle. What was it well over a 100 partners. Knowing that she wanted to continue in this vein also would let me fuck her and maybe even still love her, but I would want kids at some point and I would want them to be mine. So in order to have kids I would have to find another woman to marry and her Iwould sell as say an escort. If she loved me and just wanted me back she would take me that way, right. So I could fuck Kate, love Kate but be married to someone else to have kids with. I'd make sure that all Garys friends knew she was back in business except this time iwas in control and it would be 50 dollars a blowjob, 150 a fuck, and 300 for her ass, 5000 per first twenty at fraternities another 500 at 21, no more that 40.And Gary when I found him with a ballbat so conviently handy.I would have done one of two things, I'd either cutit off at about two inches, stuff the other 9 for kate. Or I would hit at least 5 or more homeruns using his balls. If this man even thought about sex and had the least urge, it would hurt.I would have demolished his privates.So I think that everybody in this got off to easy. Like i said obviouslyneither wanted kids, and neither cared if they did get diseases..Other wise great story

Gary shows up at the house. You already said no kids and nothing left for Gary for sex. Hubby tells her he has seen video and she is worried about pictures. Try to read the preceding parts before you publish the concluding chapter.

this is a sad story. and very deadly for they seems to be very irresponsible.

he's dumb and she is dumber. the only smart thing they did was not to have kids.

the couple have so much promise in the beginning. too bad.

which is a real shame

Great erotic sex, but still a stupid fuking wimp story. She would make a great fuck buddy, so why stay married to something like that?

What about STDS and HIV`s are you getting checked after those parties ?

Atlanta,Ga

was arousing ....was disturbing ...and i hated it in so many ways ...his revenge was not near enough on gary...and his wife needed some revenge also ....std's aids ..i couldnt have touched her for months knowing how many men she hadbeen with ...that fraternity one night when every one was asleep id have burned it down ...the basketball players i would have blackmailed for more money than i would have needed the rest of my life ...i would have taken the movies and pics and put them on the internet and made money off them ...kate would have either lived with it or whatever ...what she did deserved revenge and i feel her hubby als odeserved t omake money off her being whored ...he should have cut garys balls off and his cock very slowly over maybe a months time ...and when it was done have a signed release from from gary saying it was his fantasy to be a balless euchec ...and have it on tape begging me to slowly cut his balls and cock off slowly ..just feed him drugs and keep telling him its either that or a very slow death ...i dont believe he would want that posted on the net and sent to all his friends and family how he begged to be ass fucked and to lose what made him male ...as for the wife when ever she went out she would be required to wear a chasity belt... and as for the niggers who fucked her everyone would pay either in money or id tell their wife woman or whoever that he had and was fucking aroung on them ..and like i said the ones with money would pay out the ass for me not to do as much as i could do =to ruin them ...of course if they still wanted something to fuck or take their hostilities out on they could always have gary ... a few steroid shots and he could have really nice tits ...and of course with no dick or balls hes almost just like a woman ...granted an ugly one ...but hey we all know niggers are not picky

His dick, straight from one woman's ass, into a second woman's mouth? This is NOT in any way, shape, manner, or form, anything even approaching a 'healthier lifestyle.'

I've read all chapters and must say I'm not satisfied. Characters beyond belief - plot beyond belief. Even your story plays in never-never land it remains beyond belief.

<p>Sorry</p>

<b>Nucleus</b>

I really enjoy your stories, that is, until I read this one. Style, grammar and structure were all up to par, as usual but I just couldn't get into Kate leading Jim down the road of sexual debauchery at the end. Then the line at the end, of having a HEALTHIER AND HAPPIER sex life made me groan with discust. What about all those STDs. I can see how Kate got addicted to that life style but Jim, was the one in the beginning talking about his fantasy was just having her as a wife. Then he watches all those tapes of his wife being gangbanged so he can strenthen his resolve not to call her but miraculously an aversive stimulus becomes an intense sexual reward. Just doesn't jive. I guess that's why they call it fiction. Just not my cup of tea but that's my personal opinion of the plot which is completely dictated by the author and not bound by any rules like grammar or the other mechanics of writing. I guess I just didn't really enjoy it as much as some of your others but then I'm not used to having your stories going down that road. Of course, I haven't read all of yours. I hope this isn't an indication of what's to come.

Such a sad, sordid tale. Judging from the submission dates, this is an early work (your first?). Fortunately for your readers you have certainly improved a great deal since. Your writing skills are already evident here, your story-telling skills are not. Thankfully, this was not my first taste of your work; I might not have sampled another. Thanks for not stopping here.

Are you fucking kidding anyone with this piece of shit tale? The only scene that rang even remotely ture was when Dear Gary got his balls smashed with a baseball bat. Other than that. it was a horrifying tale of one insanity leading to another. Don't post another one.

Curious, through a lot of your stories the same thread keeps going. the need to degrade women in any way possible. Do yourself and every woman in the world a favour, find a good shrink and get your fantasies ironed out before you try and act them out out with some poor woman and end up killing her

SICK FUCKING ASSHOLE...

Call 911; you are really sick. How can any guy want something as dirty and humiliating as that? You need professional help right away! That woman is a whore and he's wimp cuckold of the worst kind. A real lousy and sick story. If you had a hard on writing it, go and seek help without delays. You need a brainwashing!

This story was great if your a rapist or a sick prick.

i...if you freaking actually read your last paragraph. It is the sickest testament to the institution of marriage that I have ever read. You need to have your keyboard put on a time-out for a very long time you sick shit. This couple need intensive therapy by the way.

Most of story was ok but tragic! What's the moral..."A good rape leads to better sex"? The title should have been, "To whore with him!" or maybe "Setting a whore free". She went way beyond what would be necessary to fulfill that fantasy anyway. She went way overboard for sex.

Saw the previous comment and decided to read the story. This writer can only be a woman, no male would ever accept a wife as described here. Sorry lady but the plot just won't work in real life

One of the most disgusting stories I have ever read. The only good thing is that I know one author I can avoid when I scan Literotica.

the Ct. Yankee

It is the most ridiculous waste of time on this site. It just doens't fly in any WAY WHATSOEVER. This is one, not one single intelligent thought in this entire story. Curious2c, you are a sad and pathetic person for even spending the couple hours creating this pile of shit. You are a joke.

You are one of the best authors on this site, by far. This offering was terrible. FIX IT!

wimp shit and badly written

she went down and took jim too. But, he went ???

"Gary" was assaulted for no reason. The Whore loved it! "Jim" should be in Prison.

Quite possibly the worst story in the LW section of Lit.

Why is this story so long? Have Gary set them up and have the gang bang and both she and her husband love it and live that lifestyle happily ever after. Only one chapter required. Why all the agony in the middle chapters? Further, spending all the development in the middle chapters and then throwing it all away at the end is dishonest to your readers. He is almost destroyed by his wife's behavior , and then magically it's now OK. This is the writing of a child that sees no need for consistent themes in a story. The hero is lost in the forest and then a magic door opens and he is back to safety. We weren't told this was a story about magic or how the magic was triggered or how it brought him to safety. Just, Poof, this is now how the world is. This is worse than just a bad story. It is disrespectful to the reader.

Crap, stupid. So much for being "only with Jim"

People were tempted everyday. The trick was maintaining self-control and remembering that actions have real, unforgiving consequences. We all have already learned that the hard way once or another. Right now, we have a choice. Our lives will be going to go one of two ways. Do we give in, embrace the whore within and find meaningless gratification for an hour or two at a time, never again knowing what it was like to love and be loved only by one person? Or did we walk away, with our remaining integrity and values still attached, with the hope of someday again finding long and lasting happiness with the one we love?

Too old fashion? Just maybe the former generation knew what they were talking about...

After thinking over this whole story today, I realized there is no way a woman could do what she went through just the first weekend and survive. It would take her at over 2 weeks to recover from that much sex if not longer. Every hole would be totally torn to shreads. Totally unrealistic.

You have done better.

Since sexual conditioning is a major theme in your stories, maybe you should do some on reversing the conditioning. Or are we totally slaves to our passions? I don't believe we are.

The author continues his passive-male disrespect of women with this one. It could have been erotic if he'd only been able to control himself. Typing with one hand will do that I guess. This writing read more like a high school student than a middle-aged male. One day he may give up the word orgasm for cum or climax. He may also stop using the words seed or sperm to describe semen or cum. The author tends to cram all his fetishes into each story, not being content to keep the characters believable to the reader. Finesse is not his strong point. He does write with contractions and generally good grammar; he just has a hard time not going over the top in his actions.

Sick and crap!

This is one sick story...

you make people wonder if your a cuckold

Or, put in a place where limp wrist dicks live.

Awesome story - it makes me hopefull to see two people come to terms with their desires and take on living them together!!!!

be true to yourself find about 10 guys and let them fuck your wife. you'll feel better.

lust is all you have.a cockold and a whore.

Don't feed the troll. Trolls live for comments; negative or positive.

You can't believe how much I wish I was that woman. There's nothing wrong with being true to your slut self!

your worst story yet.

I have enjoyed many of your stories so just ask you to avoid the idea that it is impossible to revert to just having sex with one person.

If she truly loved him and he her, the memory of how she had hurt the man she loved would swamp all others.

JUST DON'T DO IT AGAIN

You're right. Authors love comments. We write for comments, positive or negative. If that makes us trolls, well, hell yes, we are trolls. That's why we write.

As far as the story goes. It was an over-the-top story of an over-the-top fantasy. It was so blatantly perverse it was riveting. It reminded me of an old book called Candy (1958). They also made a movie of it in 1968.

Gary's seduction also reminded me of the one in Animal House where Eric Stratton (I think) showed up at the sorority to pick up his 'date' whose name he had chosen from an obituary.

The Assignment wasn't of the caliber of Animal House, but it was in the same genre of an erotic farce and very well done.

Thank you. Your comment is an accurate appraisal of most authors online. The only pay we get is the comments or feedback. Myself, I know that when someone writes about the characters in the story with anger or emotions, even when it's negative I can see that as a writer I've done my job... that being involving the reader to some extent.

In my earlier writings, like this particular story, I was learning, pushing my own personal limits, and just trying to put together a story that wasn't like 'other' stories out there.

Many of my works back then had issues other than punctuation, spelling, grammar. Some of those stories had issues with how the characters acted... or didn't act. I soon learned that having a thick skin is important if one is going to post stories online.

I don't believe I am a 'troll'. At least I don't live under a bridge and I do shower regularly often too. ;)

We (authors) all want others to read our works and like them. We like sharing thoughts, experiences and ideas through our writings. Some people like what I write, and as long as I get one good comment or feedback in one hundred, I'll continue to write.

Mostly I would like readers to note the date a story is written... I have vowed to never go back and edit any older stories as I want the reader to see how my writing improves (hopefully improves) and to see the path I've taken steps on showing my growth.

It is important to think about where in the timeline a particular story comes from to understand where I am now... and where I hope to head towards in the future.

Thank you.

DWhuecuck made it to Ch 5 and submitted multiple comments, most convincing evidence anywhere of a guy that longs to be cuckolded. This over-the-top story is exactly what the cuckdoctor ordered.

CRAP...go to hell dip SHIT...bill

This had to be one of the worst stories on the site. Stupid people and situations and no believeability at all

This one doesn't cut it for me. I guess some folks like that spouse sharing crap, but I really have my doubts that many marriages like that actually survive for long. The ending was a bummer.

It was the only sexually exciting thing about him now. His fist was the only part of him that could get her off vaginally. She couldn't feel him inside her during normal sex. At least delivering a child will be easier. Whoever's child it is will just slide right out.

if i wanted to be with a pro i would just buy one. no feelings no strings. no having to take her out. or buy her shit. funny thing is. the older i get the more women i meet that are just like this bitch. if they thought they could get away with it they would do it. I am glad there are still some normal ones out there. but how do you really know.

I did like the part that is her thouhts. she lets you know she is a slut and always wants to be one. she lies to him and he believes it. for those of you that don't see any truth to this. well this goes on every day. maybe not so many men. but one is enough for the end. if you read the story cheaper to keep her. keep in mind he only stayed for the kids. think the guy that wrote it wished he would have stayed with the kids. I should have just shot mine. told the old story thought she was getting raped and shot him. to bad she was under him.

Different strokes for different folks, but I thought the whole story was implausible from the word go.

A teacher wants a story written, with very personal erotic details based on fact. That in and of itself is horse crap, but then she redistributes these very personal stories to the other members of the class, violating everyone's private experiences? Come now! This, to say the least, strains the credulity of the reader. It would be very lacking in ethics for a university professor, and I've taken college writing courses.

The wife in this sordid tale is the most ignorant and vapid slut one could imagine. No sane, respectable woman would believe and fall for this nonsense. A real and true woman would confront the husband, even if she did believe this was his desire, and suggest he get some much needed counseling. Only a whore, and a very stupid one at that would fall for this absurd story line.

Now, let's get to the husband. After this incredible violation, the set up of which was unbelievable in the first place, how does he respond? He meekly moves out and begins drinking, going so far as to continue to keep a roof over his whore wife's head! Were I to be in this man's shoes, every man in that room would have been, at the very least, brought up on kidnapping and false imprisonment charges. Might I add, any sane man would have recognized that for a wife to behave in this fashion, she would have had to desire such a thing to begin with. Of course the author lets him gain some degree of "macho" by dispatching the protagonist Gary. But even this small degree of manhood the author gives him is then taken away from him just as quickly by having him continue the relationship with this whore. As if this is not enough insult to injury, we even see him, in the end, join in her perverted lifestyle willfully and joyfully.

I gave this tripe one star. The writing was good, but the subject matter was distasteful to say the least, and the whole story line was so implausible that it could only have taken place in some alternate universe.

finally opened their eyes and brains, TK U MLJ LV NV

More wimps and cuckold crap! Even the decent authors are getting drawn into this shit now!

you don't deserve to live, you wimp-assed faggot

Perfectly fucking awful...just awful

What do the last three chapters add to the story? The tell the same tale over and over again without telling anything new. All they do is reinforce how much of a cuck lover the author truly is

I absolutely HATED that ending. I normally just go with the flow on whatever the author is writing, whether it be reconciliation or BTB. But when an author does a complete 180 on a characters personality at the last minute, I have to yell BULLSHIT. Any other ending would have been better than that one. He goes from being disgusted by his wife getting gangbanged to actually setting some up her. I normally don't say this, but this story was a waste of time. Reading through all of those chapters to arrive at an ending that was pulled out of a hat, I am not happy with this story.

To put it bluntly your story sucked!

Depressing... It's ok to use her as his personal sex slave slut, but divorce her first. She doesn't deserve the honor of being married. At least she has to watch him with other women. Wifey basically suffered no consequences at all... Hubby takes all the humiliation and abuse. That doesn't work for me.

literary piece of shit, you are really keeping up your loser stories.

you and dear annony are pitiful losers

closet cuckold, trying to quell the shame by leaving a nasty comment 5 chapters in.

Only the truest closet cucks cry in the comments after 5 chapters.

This was awful. Really, I never like to be rude. However, this was total shit. You spend four chapters building up how much this guy hated what happened, never wanted it, wasn't sure he could get over it, and on and on ... Only to have him say in the last two paragraphs that he now loves it.

This ending really sucked, hated it. _5.

They were deliriously happy until they both showed HIV symptoms, and died 6 months later.

I was right after the first chapter, she liked what Gary did for and with her and she was a happy camper.

Jin finally coming around and liking her party games...seriously, remember the hurt and anguish at dealing with her betrayal...well, not the same guy so...

This whole story ends up being a childish, immature wannabe sex story - stupid and unrealistic.

Shame on You!

We know curious is just another dicksucker

Answer is simple: The represent your state of mind to a certain degree.

The story line is awful. The actions of the characters follow no logical path. The dialogue reminds me of "See Spot run." "Spot runs fast." Just bad.

No, very terrible. Badly written, awful grammar, juvenile story line, pathetic unrealistic characters, totally immoral, no passion, no intimacy. A total waste of time.

Shakes head....

What happened here? Is there a "0" ?

This chapter seems like one big excuse for the wife being a raging whore, and in no way does it fits the husband's earlier characterisation, the author turned him into another cliched LW cuckold.

How your husband suffered his traumatic Brain Injury. Because thats the only any man would have reconnected with you.

So a story with that much missing is truely incomplete.

Seriously.....

This last chapter had Jim so far removed from his original character it's not funny. There is no way Jim would ever want her back, and there is no way Kate would ever want to go back after discovering her new sexuality. This story is a set up to enrage the btb crowd, and mission accomplished, 10/10 for that. The original setup could have had it going down the btb path and I think that would have been a better read. Thanks for submitting your story. I don't think you're a cuck like some of the other commenters, I think based on the reviews, your goal is to enrage people. Well done. I'm suitably enraged as are so many others. Well done to you.

Garbage ending, awful characterisation, it is Jim in name only, him turning into a willing cuckold makes everything that came before pointless.

It reads more like the slutty ex-wife's wistful dream while she's sitting alone in her apartment after another night of empty sex with strangers.

The author must be trolling

After reading several of this author's stories, there is only 2 possible explanations for such over the top pussy wimp men and uber sluts with no remorse and no respect for men.

1 ) The author is really a man-hating , 3rd wave feminist, vapid, Hillary want to be, cunt

or

2) The author is in an ongoing submissive cuck relationship , don't know if he is wearing panties and a dress and sucking sperm from his wife yet, but can't be too far off. And to make himself feel better is trying to convince himself and others that men are just as submissive and weak as him.

Whichever this is, it is the last story from him/her I will be wasting any more of my life reading.

I don't want the dyke/cuck to die, like some of the other commenters. Yes, author is one sick fuck, but as long as our tax dollars aren't going to him/her, and as long as the author has no kids (gawd, could you imagine those poor kids with THIS idiot as a role model? Would either turn into a whore if daughter, or if author is male, then son will grow up to wear panties and suck sperm from his wife too), I don't really care what the douchebag does in the bedroom. OH HOW I HOPE author has no kids!

You are not well! LOL!

1*

The author had no mercy for the cuckold. The woman he got back is a whore. There is no way a man humiliated like Jim can love a whore that didn't bother to ask him if those twisted fantasies were true before whoring herself to other men. He has to man up and move on. There are other young woman ready to be loved instead of shared by the whore fraternity. The author turned Jim into a pervert to satisfy the perversions of his whorish wife. Hate the end. This is a good story to BTB!

Or a negative number.

Oh,and one other point Mr curious to cuck.austrailia is the only continent with an average I Q lower than Africa (67).That's why all you fucks are dying from aids

To the comment below ( were the fuck did you get your information from) NEVER DO I INSULT ANYONES COUNTRY OR RELIGIOUS BELIEFS SO DON'T MAKE UP LIES ABOUT US AUSTRALIANS WE HAVE A LOWER AIDS PANDEMIC THAN OTHER DEVELOPED COUNTRY! My Name is Greg and I Fought for my Country and I am Proud to be AN AUSTRALIAN !! Story is Fantastic! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

unless you're completely a disgusting lifeform . what is your motivation when writing it. neither character is remotely respectable. she's a craven slut probably mentally ill as is the male. glad I skipped to last part and skimmed

I think this belongs in sci fi

Unbelievable total fucking awful sick shit. I'm so glad I read some middle comments and jumped to end to p over to myself I was correct in my expectations.

It wouldn't be sick enough if you didn't.

You can work out issues through writing; it's not like these are Actual human beings. Your psyche has been purged.

And the vitriol of readers?

Why aren't they reading their bibles, anyway??