All Comments on 'The Assistant'

I have to say I have no criticism to offer on your story, KCMary -- I am neither writer nor critic. I can say I really enjoyed enjoyed it and that I gave it 5 *s if that is any help!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

What the hell is wrong with you?

Good question! I ask that question of myself all the time. When I figure it out I'm sure you'll be the first to know.

Why certain people pick stories in a certain category only to leave a bad score and the "what's wrong with you" comment. The question should be asked of themselves first...what were they expecting?

That being said; your story was well written, but only because you asked...there were a few sentences that went nowhere, and the switching of the verb tense from past to present and back, are the only areas that could stand a little improvement.

This category is a crapshoot, but I'm glad I took the chance with your story ;-D

turns some on, some off. Latency becomes him. RE: ANON and you telling him when you will he will and if not he will just guess. TK U MLJ LV NV

A dumb ass,this is a non consent story and the author gave a disclaimer... I really wish we could drop people like you in a very deep whole and fill it with water. To the author great sorty loved it and because of dumb ass anon you get a five ... yey thanks anon...