All Comments on 'The Atherton Job'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good idea

Thought it could use more sex, as the sex was only an 'aside', but overall it's a well done story and deserves a mention on the AH 'new stories'.

Dark_KadraDark_Kadraover 10 years ago
Nice job!

I really like the way you committed to including all of the characters. I really enjoyed following this series and I can't wait to read the next installment. Keep up the great work!

hypnoslavearihypnoslaveariover 10 years ago
awesome story

this was good I liked it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Excellent. Horrible but amazing

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