- BDSM
- The Auction
- Page 2
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Suddenly the other two women were guiding her up onto the bed. They had her straddle him, and again drive his cock deep in her pussy. The clamps still yanked gently as she rose and fell, impaling herself again and again. When she orgasmed, the two women guided her off, and onto her back. Each removed a nipple clamp as she felt her body clench, and their fingers gently explored her pussy.
Then Stevens pressed into her again. Jen's eyes shot open with surprise. But Yvette and Diane just ducked their heads, each held one of her legs up and started to suck on her already tender breasts. Now towering over her, her new master rammed himself mercilessly into her soft pussy. Finally as she began to scream in orgasm again she felt him harden, and pulse himself into her cunt. As he pulled out, he sat back on the bed, spraying the last few drops of cum on her stomach.
"Have at it girls." He said. Yvette's mouth covered Jen's pussy at record speed, and with each pulse of orgasm, she licked vigorously against the new slave. Diane was licking the cum off her roommates stomach when Stevens pulled her back and guided her to his cock by a handful of blond hair where she patiently licked off all the juices. "I think tomorrow i'll need all three of you on my slave yacht. I have a business meeting, and I think you three will help me entertain my clients nicely." He smiled at jens big eyes.
Diane just raised her mouth up slightly. "Yes Master, we'd be happy to service whomever you like." She whispered seductively before she returned to lapping all the pussy juice off his once again hardening cock.
"Mmm, good slave. I'll also have to let you play with the new girl...Not fair letting Yvette have all the fun when we all know that Slave Jen here is responsible for your demotion." Steven gently petted the blonds hair.
For a moment Jen's eyes met Diane's and she began to dread what the blonde intended to do to her from her steely look. At least that's what she told herself, as that strange pulse of heat began once again to grow between her legs at the very thought...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 9 years agoFirst, it is nonconsent. Watch your placement or tweak your content. This can seriously drop your score.
You have skimped on set up. There is not enough about before, around and after the sex to help us accept the fantasy. Even in a stroke story, we need to be able to buy into what is happening.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI really like the story idea. And your writing is pretty good - better than most. But your plot timing is a little too skimpy or convenient. There wasn't enough exposition during the first scene, in the girl's apartment. That scene should have been a 3-4 litpage chapter on it's own. Then we need some background on our protagonist. Why should we believe that she would so easily welcome her abrupt induction into a new life? That's a chapter - from her past to her present and what she fantasizes her future to be. Don't forget to build a foundation for both her submissive and lesbian orientation. What about loss of her old life? Could her induction take place over multiple visits to the club? And Diane. What is the story with her demise? Again, too skimpy. Background could have been built while also explaining Jen's story. There were at least 4 chapters in this plot. Maybe plot them out and rewrite a 'new' story. Thanks for this effort. I enjoyed it.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoWell written, I can't wait to read a series on this story.
Note five stars is rare for me.
