All Comments on 'The Audition'

Hot story. Delicious. Great background, excellent detail. Just one thing: "Now she also knew he was cute." We know that already. It didn't need to be said. It was the only wrong note. Not a disaster, just a little hiccough. Fabulous, riveting story. Well Done!

... just run together so naturally. A sweet and very hot tale.

nice to have some real feeling in a story, too many are lifeless...