All Comments on 'The Audition'

It happens more than you think

this stuff--Personally I would get excited seeing you all getting de-cocked

shit head it might happen, but I can't see anything erotic to it. I hope your fun will happen to you.

...and perfectly exciting! thanks!

Whether this is your fantasy or based on factual situations isn't the point so much. It's well-written. There are other similar stories here that are poorly written smut. If you were going for a dark, ominous, evil tone, you achieved it. It reads like an excerpt from a bigger, entangling story and I'd be curious to read more. The characterizations were really well done for such a short story. Yes, evil...yes, intriguing. Thanks and continue writing, please.

Whether this is your fantasy or based on factual situations isn't the point so much. It's well-written. There are other similar stories here that are poorly written smut. If you were going for a dark, ominous, evil tone, you achieved it. It reads like an excerpt from a bigger, entangling story and I'd be curious to read more. The characterizations were really well done for such a short story. Yes, evil...yes, intriguing. Thanks and continue writing, please.

This story was very confusing and the flow was horrible.

is there more chapters? marina story continued? or new girls alexandra gets.

Marina Jackson an English girl in a Russian school thinks she's auditioning for a part on stage. Instead, she's auctioned herself off into slavery. Short to the point with a surprise ending.

I was really surprised by how much I enjoyed this story, despite it not having any actual sex. Great idea!