All Comments on 'The Awakening'

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Excellent writing, very sexy fantasy. A fictional story about a dream where the wife gets wild (and her husband is cool with it and gets some too), and the trolls still flame. Pathetic. 5 stars. Keep writing sexy stuff.

This site has tons of mediocrity when it comes to new twists on storylines. You've set a standard way above the driveling lot of them. Keep up with more good imagination and word smithing and thank you so much for a wonderful and fun story.

I have to say that this story was quite erotic. however, you could have come up with a better ending than what you did. Or at the very least, let that last part be an actual happening and come up with some other kind of ending. It's just that the ending as it stands, is just sooo weak.... Sorry but that is how I feel about the story. It's a pretty good story ( again ) just too weak. Oh, and too short lol. I did give it like 4 stars though.

This site has tons of mediocrity in storylines, and this just adds more to.it.