All Comments on 'The Awakening'

Great story, so erotic and well written, please continue with more chapters, I loved the way you led Sally right through it. Wish it was me.

Thanks for your kind comments. I love hearing if my stories serve their intended purpose-enjoyment and arousal. I truly appreciate it and hope you find my other stories arousing as well.

That subtle twist ending screams sequel but whether that be Karen and Mary or Mr and Mrs is a new dilemma for the author.

I did enjoy reading your sensual story of lesbian awakening. Woman to woman love is such a natural thing isn't it? And the story had so much gentle, sexual passion.

I truly enjoyed reading The Awakening, it was full of love for another person. It was sexual, but very loving. It was not vulgar or crude, but very sinuous and refreshing.

Great story, thanks for sharing it with us!

this was a bit had to read, but very well done

Writing is a bit ropey, but quite successful overall.