by masterofnymphoslut
Then shrink this trash down to about 2 chapters and you MIGHT have a decent story. It's simple. You started out with over 66,000 views on the first chapter. The last chapter had less than 5000 views. That should tell you everything you need to know about how bad this has gotten. Give it a rest.
To the person who made the negative comment, you only wish you could write as good a story as masterofnymphoslut.
I gave him 5 stars.
Please continue to write more. You inspire me<3 You make me wish I could be Jean.