All Comments on 'The Awakening of Dr. Carol Ch. 01'

by CLorenzo2

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blue_elephantblue_elephantabout 12 years ago
good start

this was well developed and a good start keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
more, I want more

More I want to read more of their exploits. so far its wonderful.

ChrispeChrispeabout 12 years ago
Thank You

Please write the second chapter and hopefully many more as quickly as you can. This was very romatic and I loved the story. Great build up and development.

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