All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

Please make an effort to improve your spelling/grammar.

It never ceases to amaze me the number of anally retentive fucks on here who constantly criticise peoples spelling and grammar. My advice, for what it's worth, is to ignore them.

I really enjoyed this story and certainly did not notice the apparent glaring errors that the previous twat mentioned. Keep up the good work Tarzan :)

Yep, cos God knows when I'm reading a story this good and i have my clit in one hand, I have my dictionary and red pen in the other *rolls eyes*

I'm something of a grammar Nazi myself, but I didn't really have a problem with this story. As long as his grammar isn't bad enough to distract fringe story or to make it hard to understand, there isn't anything you should complain about.