All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

wow - lets hear the whole summer - and develop the other characters - Nancy may actually be hot if she can get that stick out of her ass - lols.

Looking to see if this ends up as a 3some w/ the wife. Roomie would be easy

Oh honey that was the best story ever

You have pure talent for erotica and it was so hot and steamy

Don't stop writing

I do hope that this continues with the same heat you gave it here. What happens with your characters is for you to determine and I would guess that if you do continue this that you already know where you want to take this. You've a good feel for a story and the sex was hot and hard. Thanks

My vote is don't involve the wife. Make it illicit and forbidden....it's sooooo much hotter that way....almost getting caught, barely waiting to rip each other's clothes off...those things just fuel the heat. Him being the first 'man' she's been with...perfect. I remember being in those situations....and I also remember the intensity from such. That's what you did such a good job of portraying in this story. I look forward to more :)

5-Stars! Great story, very hot and sexy. I hope you will continue it as a series, as I would love to see more of Shane and Morgan together.

That was a fantastic read! I would love to read more.

This is a start of a great story! Keep it going!

Nice way to build tension, make cheaters seem likable. Well done!

I absolutely loved it.

Loved your babby setter stories. They rated 5 from me.I'm looking forword to reading some of your other work.Keep them coming.Keep in touch let me know when you post new stories.Charlesxxxxxxxxxx

That was so fucking hot, ready to here more about Morgan and Shane! 5+ stars.

Love how Ch 1 ends. Will Morgan turn out to be pregnant in the later Chapters? The wife seems quite dislike able. Keep it with that forbidden alure with only Shane & Morgan. They make it very hot. Your such a great writer! Hope to read Ch 4 soon.

I would love to read so much more!

Hoping they get caught and he kicks his bitch wife Nancy to the curb and hooks up with Morgan!

Shane couldn't resist her since he saw her DD's.

Lucky Shane!!!

Good job! You've got it. Real talent.