All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Ch. 01'

I'm interested in reading more.

So now that I'm hooked I hope you slow it down a bit next ch and do a lil more background info.

Really like the angle you used & it'll be interesting to see if you have Sam find her true mate in a wolf or her fiancé, if you choose to have them reconnect. Its your journey, I'll just follow along.

~LadySilverNova~

What a wonderful start. I really enjoyed reading your post. Hope there is many more chapters to follow. Sam appears to be an Alpha. I wonder if the man she was going to marry is the Alpha of the pack that has her now. If she will ever see him again. Will she see Jake again and what will their relationship be like. So many questions. Great start.

Enjoying this story very much...more soon please. Excellent start can't wait to see what happens to Sam

Can't wait to see what happens to Sam and jack. I hope they get together or the alpha of the rescuing pack is Sam's mate

I love it so far and I can't wait for Sam and Jack to find their mates.

You are off to a great start. The idea of Jack taking the time to explain everything to Sam and giving her some choices was a nice touch. That they are now mated or at least until they find their true mate is an interesting touch. Now the next question is who are each of them really mated to? Maybe the new Alpha for Sam? I love a story that has me ask myself questions, it just makes waiting for the next chapter that much more interesting. So more please

Not bad. Not great, but not terrible. The writing itself is fairly clean and fluid and you have a good story going, but I feel like what you presented here could have been filled out and broken up over several chapters. Develop the world a bit and the characters a lot and you should see a more favorable response from your readers. Just because you can see it in your head doesn't necessarily mean that we can. I want to lose myself in this storyline. You have a lot of potential.

I am looking forward to next chapter to see what happens with Sam and Jacques. Zgirl

It somehow went too fast for me. I mean she was just kidnapped, and then she suddenly becomes okay with him being a werewolf and all. But other readers like them fast hehe

good work, expecting new chapters, soon?

Great job on your first chapter.I cant wait to read the next one and I have a feeling her mate will be the alpha of the new pack that they are going to. cuz she plays a good role az alpha female.

Great start.....please continue this!!!!!!! I hate when I start a story and the author never comes back and finish it. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like the idea and how it's shaping up. However, the change between present and past tense is distracting and the word is "rogues" not "rouges". Other than that, though, I look forward to the next chapter!

Your story was very good except for a few typos. I hope that the rest of the story will be even better.

A very grim stsrt, but then giving some hope.

Her friends were described very detailed, makes me wonder will they reappear later in the story.