All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Parties'

Just more of the same boring journal entries. And for your information cathytheghost, I'm not clueless because I started reading this on-going story at the start and it was good till you changed it to a journal or blog type deal. Now it's no longer in story form and very boring. With a journal or blog type setting, you don't have the characters interacting with each other and it's difficult to tell what is going on so this isn't a interesting story anymore.

Lets see you have read them all but keep coming back why?This style is not for everyone I can understand that but come on it only makes you look bad when you say you dont remember what just happend in the last section.Well there is at least one more to be published here maybe the last chapter as well I havent made my mind up and yes there both the same style so please dont read or if you do be warned and dont waste time complaining about my lousy style I chose to write in just mark it a 0 and be done

with it ok.Oh yeah I never said I was a good writer im stil trying to figure out how to do this but to me the blog seemed like a natural way to tell several characters points of view on events.

Caty

Stupid. Couldn't follow

You’ll had the others that would not approve ... so I really like your stories so why haven’t you done more.??? Please