All Comments on 'The Bad Deal Ch. 02'

time to set frank up mom needs to tell her son what happen and get up to help set frank up

And he's a real prick- I hope, like anon wrote before me, that he falls when all is revealed.

Yep time for ole Frank to pay. I mean with in the very inch of his life. Maybe ole Marie will fill his poop chute with an oversized dildo and maybe sonny boy can fuck daddy's new girl. Then cut franks balls off and let him bleed to death. That's how I would write next chapter but it's your story author

You took a good story and relegated it to some predictable fat-fetched trash. The threesome nonsense was not only poorly written but hilariously reeked of some virginal mind at work with the magical bending of logistics. The first chapter showed potential and this just threw it away being boring and predictable. 1 star.

Looking forward to reading your works saywut, because I'm sure you're not an entirely useless person who just critiques without creating.

I like it she was dumb & deserves to get played. You read revenge stories with the chicks always pulling one on a guy. I like that he made her pay for ruining their marriage/family. She also proved to be a bad mom fucking her son on cam puts him at risk for exposure. Shes dumb & I hope he has back ups cause lets face it anything she tries to do back won't be as bad as being a son-fucker. Plus she betrayed her son seducing/using him lets not forget she recorded him without his knowledge. Fyi I'm a chick not a bitter guy lols.

I love how Marie is being used and abused...

thanks for a real hot story

Good Story. Do you plan on adding chapters?