All Comments on 'The Bar Pt. 01'

Too short! Gave it 3 stars because it seemed well written, But the next chapter better be a hell of a lot better if you want a higher rating from anyone.

"Extenuate my tight rear"? Really? Peaceful start. Would prefer her to have rubbed one out in the shower and maybe tingled a bit 'down there,' what with what a hunk Logan is . . .

I like your pace. You write at a good level, take your story where you want it to go at the pace you want. No need to listen to no talent dwebes.

No stars minus 5 if I could

Seceded from the union. F for you.