All Comments on 'The Barbarian: A Princess' Fantasy'

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Winter_FareWinter_Fareabout 1 year ago

I enjoyed this, nice twist. Not sure why but the MCs attitude reminded me of Danifae in War of the Spider Queen. Blast from the past.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Amazing. I wish this was a book, only if aldrat was alive he could see his baby though😔✊️

mseg14mseg1412 months ago

It delivers what it promises. English is not my first language, but should it really be “and few more”? Should it not be something like “and even fewer”, even considering one tries to achieve an archaic effect? Only a suggestion, of course. Valenholme? It sounds almost Swedish.

Crusader235Crusader23512 months ago

Great story. It's scary when a powerful woman, a Princess no less, knows exactly what she wants, and goes after it. Love how she handled him. I wonder if she trained her Son in the art of subduction? Maybe another story.

Five stars, loved it.

SstrangerSstranger5 months ago

That’s one of my fav’s story , good job

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