All Comments on 'The Barcelona Series Pt. 03'

Unlike the two characters in this story who make a big deal about the sexual connection, this story is failing to connect with me. The writing is fine, so I'm not sure why its not working for me. Perhaps its the "couldnt give a shit" attitude that Irene has towards her husband making no effort to rekindle any sexual spark with him even when she appears to have thrown off her repressive chains, despite saying he's always horny.

Thanks for your efforts

Which is a fucking lie since she has two children or was that the immaculate fucking conception? If you have to twist the story to make it fit your particular kink then it doesn't work. And you can't tell me that uses happily married if she is disrespectful to her husband, no respect means unhappily.

Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us!!!

Congratulations

I really like this series of stories and can't wait to see where it goes. Great descriptions and details on the sex scenes. Good character development and nice writing style. Keep the chapters coming and keep us stimulated. My wife and I are reading the stories together and they get us both aroused. Guess that is the point. Gave it a five star rating too.

How happy he was that the harpy is out of the house. How he is glad somebody else has to touch the discussing creature. But mostly glad that he has not caught AIDS from her or her other STDs. Also Spain does not have No-Fault divorce. So now he can rid himself and the kids of the horrible bitch for good.

Personally, I hope the husband divorces her. This is not an open marriage, she has decided to explore her sensual side without consulting her "loving" husband....he must either accept her infidelity or leave. That is an untenable position to be in. Irene is a cheater, her husband is an unknown cuckold, and her lover, while a talented lover and operating within the bounds of HIS marriage, none-the-less has no qualms about screwing a married woman and possibly destroying a husband and family. I hope it blows up in their faces..I am not a BTB type of guy but their utter unconcern for the "loving" husband burns me up....she doesn't care a bit about what it is going to do to him.

Still Good!

thecarolinadreamer

Great 2nd chapter .

To my good friend CD, how in the name of all that’s holy could you think this was a good story? This is garbage of the lowest kind.

After skimming this story, is obvious to me that the Spanish wife does not love her husband. Any fool taking first-year psychology in college can tell you that, stories like this are the best reason why all couples should test drive each other before they get married. You can find out if your wife is a bad lay if she gives bad head and she could see if she likes your average size cock or if she likes her bigger than average size cock. No reason for any couple nowadays ago into a marriage especially on the honeymoon with their eyes not totally open to the capabilities of how they can please each other, or that there's an opportunity for them to grow to learn how to please each other. The MC the American male is a total piece of s***, guys you know I'm telling the truth. All of us have worked or Associated or been on a sports or some kind of League team where you always meet that one piece of s***, who doesn't care about anything but himself really, and this husband is definitely one like that. There was a guy and a sports like I was on in my first 5 years of marriage to my wife and he wasn't hitting on my wife even though he did show some interest in her, but he hit on one of my best friends wives and this full didn't realize that my best friend never advertise the fact that he was a member of law enforcement. Will this fool ended up making out with my best friend's wife a couple of times and then she pushed him away, I guess she realized what she was doing was wrong. All my friend found out what was going on and let's say that this guy disappeared, for reals, no one ever saw him again, and there were no questions asked since he was generally thought of as a piece of s***. As I said before these writers' right stories we really know real life consequences most of the time and that's why I generally just skimmed these stories. Now one last thought if a couple of these sites to expand your boundaries and they both do it in an open marriage open relationship or as part of a swinging couple that's not my cup of tea but I would never judge him because they're both equally spreading their wings and if the wife in this story was honest enough she would tell her husband I want to do this and you have the freedom to do what you want to do

To Echo what the commentator from 4 months ago said, couldn't agree with his sentiment anymore than possible. My first wife and I were married 9 years, living in the Chicago area, and we were both involved in 16 inch softball leagues with the Chicago Park District. Sometimes the guys teams will be playing in a field right next to the women's teams, and one night I noticed one of the guys on the opposing team making advances on my wife and a couple of the other married women. I like to commentator of 4 months ago I don't sit there and wait for my wife to do something to turn him down, because sometimes women do stupid things and make stupid decisions. My first cousin was a member of Cook County Sheriff's department at that time, one phone call to him and a couple of lowlifes that he know took care of the person in question. He was found behind a Rush Street Bar both of his elbows and knees shattered and missing his nuts. Would like to see more stories on this website would real life consequences where real men stood up and took care of business.