All Comments on 'The Bartender'

I loved this storie please continue it

I thought there was to much background story. Less talking, more fucking!!!!

I enjoyed your story....it as hoooot! Plz do a part 2 :)

The only thing is it would have been better if the story did not jump from character to character just stick to a single point of view or maybe try doing it from a third person

Your writing style is just fine and I look forward to any future stories you create.

Really enjoyed this - I look forward to seeing episode two...

You write well keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter!