All Comments on 'The Baseball Trip Pt. 02'

Interesting story and characters. Looking forward to see how it develops. Thank you.

You have a talent for creating tension in your stories and giving the characters depth. I'm enjoying the story line more than the sex! Definite 5 stars!

- Large beer at the Brewers game: $12

- Hotel room in Chicago: $175

- Writing that Milwaukee is west of Chicago: priceless

I'm not sure of all of the body positions in the 'bug', but the self and other masturbation sounds good. I like the story line, but Kelsey is a virgin and probably not on the pill. Sara has a secret about her boy friend that she is using to keep him at arms length, but still wants self pleasuring sex. She is kind of a tease. What about Jules? Maybe we will find out tonight in bed.

All of these stories that lead to pregnancy aren't something that does it for me. Birth control makes recreational sex so much more fun.

Loved the public bj! Kelsie is a little hottie!

Worlds best adventure.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Not really a baseball fan but have a couple different hot ladies play with my bat and balls might convert me! Great story, great characters and promises of great sex. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.