All Comments on 'The Baseball Trip Pt. 03'

...enough said!

I am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters. I hope I do not have to wait long

Wonderful writing can’t wait for you to write more

absolutely amazing series

I want to skip ahead...but i cant!

When is he going to shove his meat inside each of the besties, break Kelsey's cherry, and ring both of their bells with his'clapper'? Probably going to need a condom for Kelsey. No one better get preggers.

Jules needs to get in on this action too.

Good story, lovely pace

The ultimate road trip! Hotties and baseball!! You can't beat it!! Five stars and a favorite point!

This last hottub scene did not work for me. The water would wash away the lubrication and make the action described painful. And his cum would be kept from leaving the tub at all. Sorry, but to me that is too much for the "suspension of disbelief" to cover, especially given the extraordinary circumstances.

Best vacation story!

What’s next?

Julie needs some action

And it's a double play by Ben at third base that ends the inning! Sorry, just had to say that, lol. I am enjoying your story immensely and look forward to reading the next chapter. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Enjoying the story, but you should study up on female anatomy. The hymen is a fleshy piece of skin at the very opening of the vagina and is not a “hardened ring” although some are ring shaped. He wouldn’t be able to get a finger, let alone two, into her without stretching/tearing the hymen - if it was even still intact.

Seriously one of my favourite stories, I hardly ever leave comments as I tend to be late to the party but this is great. Also great fun too.

I love your sense of humour outrageous at times but always adds to the occasion. And as I've said before "i like a a bit of fun with my sex".