All Comments on 'The Baseball Trip Pt. 05'

Another great installment. I've been hooked on this series since you first published part 1 and anxiously anticipate each chapter. The characters and storytelling are so vivid and interesting. Awesome work and I can't wait for the rest of the series.

My least favorite of this series so far, but that is primarily due to the fact that Julia is the least developed character in the story at this point, and in this- her "centerpiece" episode- she is primarily characterized through her angry, dominant sexuality. (To be fair, I am just not a big fan of bdsm on any level, so that may certainly color my receptivity).

That said, your writing is still above the majority of the stories on this site, and I not only look forward to the rest of this series, but any future installments. Thank you for sharing.

I'm glad Jules finally got into the story, however I wasn't thrilled that her first time with Ben was so angry. Loving sex is best, although there are exceptions. I like your writing style even if I'm not thrilled with the story line. Oh well, what do I know, you're the writer.

God this is getting so good! I am. It sure who I want Ben to get with. I know I’m reading this story now that it’s a year old but still. I love your style of writing. Love the story. Love the humor. Love the sex! I really think Ben has true feelings for Julia as does Julia for Ben. I also have a feeling that Sarah, is hiding a little something. Think she is growing feelsings for Ben but can sense what is between he and Julia. Kensley, I think she could be there little toy. On to the next chapter!!

Really enjoyed the first four chapters, but this one feels a bit like jumping the shark.

I wasn't crazy about the violent/angry sex with Jules but it got much better in the dorm room. I can't wait to see what Day 6 brings. Five stars and a favorite point!

I lost it at "Ben, you don't have to raise your own hand."

I think Mel needed some attention from Ben.

Bring on the next city!

I really hope you write a side story having to do with Kelsey and Jim, and their fooling around. Obviously they don't go all the way but that would be really hot!

"Clearly what we're dealing with here is what is known in the medical community as a 'magic penis.'"

It all got a bit too busy in Chapters 3 & 4 became a bit hard to follow, still a good storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

A thought about Julia’s aggressive sexuality. Normally I do not care for domination scenes. But this one makes sense to me based on her learning from Sarah and Kelsey about Ben’s “magic penis” and becoming angry with herself and with Ben that they’ve lived together two years and not done anything. By the way how big is his penis? And while I’m asking about size, it looks like we never will be told Sarah’s cup size either. Maybe it’s for the best. We can imagine she might be L or M for ourselves this way. AWESOME STORY!

Another awesome episode. And the addition of Mel was great.

Good story! Can't wait to see Sarah jumping on his cock