All Comments on 'The Baseball Trip Pt. 07'

Great story! Keep up the good work!

Great writing

I like that Jules finally got it without beating herself up. She needed to learn it was possible, even though she did use 'the slap' to prime herself.

Kelsey and Sarah finally got Jiggy with it. Now is Sarah going to find out what she has been missing only giving herself to loser Rob?

Come on Ben... Take her to paradise.

You ain’t whistling Dixie, Sarah!!

Well that was fucking HOT!

You are such a great writer. I'm definitely inspired! 😊👍

The best chapter yet! Loved how all four are now comfortable in the same room and the girls are enjoying each other too! Five stars and a favorite point!

I love baseball and enjoy erotica. You have done a superb job combining both.

IF there was any criticism, was there a missed opportunity for a “Seventh Inning Stretch” reference?? Or maybe during the 6th inning Mel was a nice “middle reliever”

Can’t wait for the Eighth and Ninth innings!!!

The bases were fully loaded and everyone got to home. Great game.

Wish that was my vacation.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

The Baseball Trip > The Florida Trip. Sorry, it just is.

So nice when good friends become great friends with benefits! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

LIKE AN ASIDE TO THE AUDIENCE IN A MELODRAMA, THIS IS HILARIOUS—

—“Though it was the perfect setup for a swim, the pool area itself was completely empty, as if we were just characters in a story and someone had written us the perfect backdrop for our illicit business.”

YOU THINK MAYBE THEY REALLY ARE CHARACTERS IN SOMEONE’S STORY? HEH HEH!

FUNNY AS EVERYTHING. THANK YOU, O MOST AMAZING AUTHOR!