by RG1637
Okay, missed there a bit. Seems the catagory definitions weren't clear enough. For a short - hope it was a good read.
I liked that it was realistic.
As for the 'mature' comments, it's up to the author where to put the stories. Some of mine could be mature, couples, or BDSM or a few other categories.
I would suggest using one of the editors available, They can help with the grammar and spelling mistakes.
Keep writing Rg1637
This was hot, and nicely written...straight to the point!