All Comments on 'The Bathroom'

by MsViolent

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I like short stories but .........

No build up, no real description. Let a guy rub one out here!

swingerjoeswingerjoealmost 10 years ago
Hmm...

"It was a text from his wife telling him all about it."

About what? Are we to infer that it was his wife on the other side of that hole? Or was she telling him all about her night out, presumably with some strange man?

I suppose the author intentionally left that question for the reader to decide.

MsViolentMsViolentalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Hmm...

Yes, perhaps the author did leave the last sentence ambiguous in order to let the reader decide what it means.

But I think there are enough clues in the story and elsewhere to allow the reader to figure it out on their own. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I was just glad he escaped

with his penis in one piece.

amber_now26amber_now26over 9 years ago
very clear

I thought the ending was very clear and made the entire story considerably more erotic.

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