All Comments on 'The Bathroom Break'

Amazing build up and blow job scene! God that was very hot! Excellent first story - you are a good writer.

Good first story, only one comment I've never been able to pee when hard even when bursting to do so. Been semi hard but never full on

Loved the story - great first submission. Sounds like something I would have done in college. Now my husband gets the benefits ;}

Great first story! Very enjoyable and considering this is the Writer's first submission, I think we can pretty safely assume with writing the quality of his - he won't get lost! Wonderful Read. Well Written! Congrats on your first submission.

...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

Hi Zand,

Looks like you have a hit! Congrats! Thanks for the mention. Keep the stories coming.

fucking hot!

You need to continue this one - a work affair between them ...great stuff!!!