All Comments on 'The Batteries'

Fun story! The webcamgirl/ad exec makes for a good character. Having her wear her toys when she goes out, especially the butt plug is VERY hot! Look forward to hearing more of her adventures....

Thanks Allie! I love stories about exhibitionism. The battery ploy was a nice twist, hope to see you someday in the parking lot! Next time and please let there be a next time, try buying shoes and giving the shoe salesman a time to remember! Thanks again!

Nicely done. I would like to see this story developed further. I like your writing style and imagination. We need more!

Just one thing wrong. It needs to be about four times longer. It's a great story concept. Please give some consideration to expanding it.