All Comments on 'The Beach'

Great story - but next submission make sure to remove your proofreader's suggestions. They [suggestions] are dead on the money! So many alternatives to "rubbed" that sound sexier and leave more to the imagination. Erasers "rub" if you know what I mean.

Your grammar is good - you don't fall into the abyss like those who use your instead of you're, no instead of know, and quite instead of quiet. Give us some more text baby!

The (comments) made me laugh, it was almost as though you were talking to yourself LOL

Good story, well paced and cut to the chase.

All I can say is lucky blonde...

I love fast, quick sex at the beach...nice going DT. I must agree, that blond was extremely lucky!

Honey