All Comments on 'The Beach House Ch. 01'

by Longdays

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Totally unPC but I loved it

Awww, why did the au pair have to leave???? Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Building to the inevitable

Very well written and plausible. Nice building of the sexual tension. Makes the eventual release all the better!!

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Shitty Teaser--Needs Work....A LOT OF WORK!

Too much of an abrupt ending. Are we going to see a continuation of this story?

An Awful CadAn Awful Cadalmost 18 years ago
Masterful

Masterful smut. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Bloody Fantastic

Oh Wow !!! unreal !!! you are the man !!! more more pls on my knees begging for more ....

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Well done!

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