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Anonymousover 8 years ago5 Starz But You Aint Done With It
I scored it 5 starz but it needs lotsa work to make it shine. Its appealing but not yet compelling. That is, plenty of the action seems like meh acting rather than spontaneous interactions.
Anonymousover 8 years agoGreat story!
Love it! Great second part to the story and looking forward to seeing more.
JJMemaw0623over 7 years agoMore, please?
Can you please find it in your heart to continue Rose & Dio's story? There has to be more! Keep writing!
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