All Comments on 'The Beach Hut'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well written

and an interesting twist. First times are always special!

StuckInAlbuquerqueStuckInAlbuquerqueover 12 years ago
beach hut

great story with good twist

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 12 years ago
Sweet story

Sweet story, I had a feeling even before I read all the story it was her he met there.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
What a lovely tale.

Fine writing, and there is even a plot with a twist. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Love the plot twist. Don't know if I would have been so happy that my husband was think about some namesless woman (even if it was unknowingly me) but I still loved it. Five stars.

kalodinkalodinover 12 years ago
A Great Beginning

Oh so well done. Wish I could write at the level of this piece. But as a reader quickly and completely drawn into the the story. Thank you. Of course now we expect more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story, great writing, and a very interesting twist at the end. Please write more!

KentishKentishover 12 years ago
Lovely story

well worth 5 stars

mynameisbenmynameisbenover 12 years ago
Don't ever sell that beach hut!

How can I not give this story a five star rating? It's sweet, romantic, brilliantly written, and oh, so wickedly HOT! Every paragraph was a pleasure to read, except one.

I loved it. Outstanding!

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