All Comments on 'The Beach Vacation'

You knew just where to pull this back so that it didn't tip over from erotica into banality. Look forward to reading your next tale.

more please

perfect story very realistic......what happened over the next three days? Please tell us

That was extremely erotic but please don't let it end there with 2 days of vacation left

Absolutely great story! If you like, email me at hammscott3@gmail.com. Love to chat more about ideas/stories etc...thanks!!!

Great little story, Chapter 2 please.

Great first story, nice paced, well written and good sense of emotions. Keep up the good work.

Great first story. Please continue to write.

Wonderful hot sexy story, thanks. Had me very hard.

If this is your first story, I'm adding you to my favourite authors! Can't wait for the next chapter if you write one.

Thanks for your very hot and sexy story. I particularly like it because it's totally believable. It could have happened!

Completely plausible storyline and events make it believable and those are the very best kinds of stories. Nice job!

please there has to be a part 2!

Please do a part 2. This story was so hot!

Please please I need a part 2 one of my favourite stories

Oh my, so naughty and mostly well written.

You’ve waited too long for the next part….

I like this

Write another story!