All Comments on 'The Beautiful Night Ch. 01'

I too enjoyed the previous Genie stories. What also makes this story enjoyable is the way you added the little twist, to make it your own. I look forward to new chapters, and good luck with your book.

I loved the GC and this seems to be in same vein but not sure of the shapeshifter thing...seems to put it into the realm of total fantasy. But hey they're YOUR stories not mine..

I like it so far, still, but as others said I'm not sure about the shape shifter angle. Will have to wait and see how that works out. But you've definitely got me following your tale.

I look forward to this continuing.

Waited a year & 1/2 for another sex genie story. This looks like it will be good. Keep writing! I like that you tied it into George & dawn. Gorilla said he would have a chapter every month or so, too. Let's see if you keep YOUR promise.

please continue!!!

... is that they don't get finished. This is another case of a great beginning that gets abandoned at the "to be continued" stage :-(

Excellent story, certainly continuing the theme of the stories from Joe Brolly and 800lb Gorilla, but the added twist of being a shapeshifter will ensure an excellent plot.

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

Like the others stated you are off to a good start and we all want more. It would be a shame to let such great potential go to waste.

Continue the storrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!

You really should continue this it is excellently written and presented I think it could be a very interesting and romantic story :) anyway what's up with all the writers of the sec genie stories they all disappear at one time or another :(

I sure hope that one day you'll actually continue the story. Its really good so far and I would hate for it to just sit there and not get updated.

very interested in reading further... please let me know when you add chapters

It is now nearly the end of 2018. Are you still alive?

Why start if you cannot finish?

I thought it would be a good story.......

Great storyline. Disappointed that it seems to have stopped. Would be great if you would pick it up again. Thanks.