All Comments on 'The Beginning'

A nicely written story Sparkle. Not as pornographic as most, but erotic and appatite whetting.haha I do enjoy the "dull, prudish, housewife" type who can and will let her hair down and tell me about her past or her fantasies. A bit more exciting when the past and fantasy are mixed.haha I hope you will write more Sparkle, you have a talent and have peaked my curiousity about what might be real from your life. But longer stories would be nice, a chance to enjoy the hard on you give me to its fullest. Thank you again. By the way, as an older man here, I to enjoy the youthful and pixie like body that you describe. Richard

I'm afraid I must disagree with "brfinest". This is very pornographic in the best sense of the word. A very nice story. This author owes us more. Needs to use her obvious talent.