All Comments on 'The Beginning and The End'

1*, why? Because this is a copy and paste of the serial stories of "Brandi" by @alandaalan!!!!! The last storie of this serie is " Brandi Fails at Being a Mother"!!! So or @Nohj2 is @alandaalan, and he is reposting his stories with another name, or @Nohj2 stole @alandaalan story...

I write under different pen names. But if it wasn't for Mr. Porn himself, nobody would have ever known. And that is why. Did I answer your question, Mr. Porn?

DA! JOHN

And such a stupid plot, not worth trying.

@alandaalan...I didn't called you names...Nor commented the story...I just stated a fact and for sure I have a good memory...Difficult to forget a so sad story that ends so dramatically...That's what triggered my memory...You can use all the pen names you want...It's your right...But I don't have to know all of them...I just stated that or it was you in a different pen name or someone had used your work...But for sure you would be the one called "Mr. Porn" because you are the one writing this stuff and uses a lot of pen names...To be sure I was right I made a search using "Brandi" and easily found out I was right...The 1* was only for why you felt the need to post the same story using another pen name...I may read a lot of stories, but I never insulted a writer...I just comment the plots and the characters...

I liked the story

the effort and content.

I made it through page 4. Im fucking tough. Oh yeah. She didnt do it for me, she did it fo Alan. Knoj, who the fuk is Alan? Oh, and buy the, i mean, by the way, what ever happened to poor old Joe-the guy who got all this schitt rolling?

So, Brad has heard all about Brandi (or maybe it was Brandy this time?) from Ellen, who has obviously told him about her problem with wine, but they of course knew she had not told Brad that Brandy was married so Brandi new (ha) she could intro Alan as her boyfriend rather than as her hubby. I wonder what tent of pants Brad had tinted. ( Oh schitt, this is a riot.)

All in all, there were several moments of real critical thinking indicating some truth to some aspects of the story which i suppose occurred between bouts of being stoned or drunk.

Now Alan or Nohj, loves hisvwife and it trying to help her mental stability which becomes unstable when she fucks around so lets just forget that and go back to jerking off when she gets fucked by Brads dad.... ... .. . . . 2

When this story was originally written by "alandaalan, he used the name Alan in the story. I got alandaalan permission to re-write the story and change the name to Nohj. I must of missed removing a few Alan's. Of course you always find an Alan in the woodwork somewhere. No offense to all you Alan's out there. I get a big laugh out of most of the comments. I really do wish you would reread it. I wished you could put a close pen over your nose and finish it. I would like to hear your remarks on how the story ended. But thanks for reading 4.

A married man's masturbatory fantasies of his wife degrading herself by always submitting, after a little alcohol, to various men. Not at all unusual. But this guy gets so deep in his guilt trip about doing this to her in his fiction that his remedy for self-perceived perversity is to kill her off in a cautionary ending. This marriage of masturbatory fantasy and cautionary tale was made in a dick-wilting hellhole. If the sick fuck already can't handle mistreating his wife in this fantasy, why would he compound his agony by killing her off? Better the narrator immolate self or story ...Oh, well, who says daydreams have to be logical.

Bad story with a sad end.

where LOVE is the central culprit and love comes and goes with each individuals needs, TK U MLJ LV NV