All Comments on 'The Bell'

As the first part of a longer story this is an interesting setup. There isn't enough here though if it is supposed to stand alone.

It feels really fresh to read a different kind of sub-dom story without the actual sub-dom stuff.

Edward is clearly very happy to be the submissive one in the relationship but he doesn't follow her blindly.

Juliet is more like the teasing charismatic one. I like her so far.

Please do more!