All Comments on 'The Benefit of a Storm'

by Jena121

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I will Also

Be coming back for more,perhaps next time they will have a long drawn out shag with them trying every position possible,especially him taking her doggie fashion while he really gives it to her. J.

VULCAN4231VULCAN4231almost 16 years ago
Now

Is your chance to write a really erotic sequel to this,they can stay in bed all day if you want.

William smythWilliam smythalmost 16 years ago
Different

A little different form you usual but very, very good.

I liked the story line and think youcan very well expand on it.

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 16 years ago
Great fantasy!

Wonderful job! Nice fantasy, very sensual!

luvpsyluvpsyalmost 16 years ago
ending seemed unreal

It's a bit difficult to imagine a woman sleeping so soundly

that she doesn't realise she's got a cock in her. Otherwise,

I loved the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Suspend your disbelief

It's fiction - so what if bits may not be real. More surprising maybe is tha next morning she didn't realise she had a dried wet spot in the bed and a cunt full of spunk between her legs. But I loved it anyway

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